Okay I am just really bad on commenting about this story. The only excuse I have is that it so completely sucks me in that I end up saving it on my laptop and reading it later (because I do have to work for a living) then re-reading it. Like the dolt I am, I completely forget to comment.

First, this chapter. It may have been hard to write but its wonderful - simply wonderful.

Story as a whole - I adore AUs (points to her journal) because it takes the known and twists it just enough to make it unknown.

You are brilliant!