You know I'll read anyway, so please don't think this is a criticism.

Oh no, my dear, trust me, I love this kind of feedback and honesty. I mean, I just got hate mail privately so believe me, your response is a refreshing one.

I know Jack has to go to the bad place, but I want some more comfort for him darn it! Just a smidge more. A tiny morsel. A teddy bear to hold off the dark.

It's funny you should mention that because it was what I worried anout when I was going into the 'Year', because personally I want a balance despite their situation. I think I achieved it in the next chapter and acts. We shall see. -fingers crossed-