I really love what you've done here. There was such a start to the healing during the shower and then the bed scenes. I loved that they were moving past the awkwardness they experienced when they were first back together.

I agree that Ianto was right to tell the Doctor not to say anything to Jack. I just hope that that doesn't come back to haunt them. Sometimes being honest isn't as important as the truth. The truth is that Jack's been through enough, and hurting him anymore is reprehensible.

I can't wait to see the epilogue. AND the sequel! :)