http://darkchan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] darkchan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] d8rkmessngr 2009-09-16 02:01 am (UTC)

I love this fic. It is awesome.

Minor quibble / Public Service Announcement
He bunched his fists, thumbs tucked in, like he often advised the class he assisted teaching

You should never ever tuck your thumbs in your fist when throwing a punch. That is a very good way to dislocate/break your thumb. What your supposed to do is curl your thumb up under your knuckles, and use your knuckles for the impact. Sorry about being so vehement, but Tae Kwon Do has kinda pounded that into my brain.

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