Date: 2008-12-21 05:34 am (UTC)
1) "corporeal-ness" ... maybe corporeality? Corporeal-ness is a little ... stilted.

Hm, oddly enough Word didn't recognize the second word. Oh well, override and fixed! :)


2) Even understanding that Ianto speaks Welsh, it is a little bit distracting to those of us who don't to have random Welsh words thrown in ... 'diolch'? I can figure out 'cariad' well enough, but ...

Oh, sorry! That word popped up even more than cariad that I assumed when I shouldn't have and left it to context. I learned from fanfic it meant thank you.

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