Fantastic!! A "realistic" mpreg (usually that's really an oxymoron). You do it well by showing that this really isn't a "normal" pregnancy misplaced, with the moveable womb etc. Loved this wonderful angsty chapter. It is usually very hard to feel that Jack is in jeopardy. This worked so well. Very good.
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Date: 2009-03-08 01:16 pm (UTC)Loved this wonderful angsty chapter. It is usually very hard to feel that Jack is in jeopardy. This worked so well.
Very good.