I saw this prompt and actually began to write a story -- I think I got a few pages into it and then got distracted by something else. All I can say is that your vision for this story eclipses mine so wholeheartedly, I'm really glad I never finished it.
The central theme to this story is about trust and I love the way you bring it into the plot with each new event that happens. There is so much angst and so much love -- it's heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time.
I really enjoyed your characterisations of Jim and Bones, the dialogue, and the flow of the story. I ended up reading into the small hours, because I couldn't put it down!
It's wonderful that love won out in the end and I'm so pleased you topped it all off with that really hot scene at the end. :-)
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branchandroot
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Date: 2009-11-11 01:11 pm (UTC)The central theme to this story is about trust and I love the way you bring it into the plot with each new event that happens. There is so much angst and so much love -- it's heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time.
I really enjoyed your characterisations of Jim and Bones, the dialogue, and the flow of the story. I ended up reading into the small hours, because I couldn't put it down!
It's wonderful that love won out in the end and I'm so pleased you topped it all off with that really hot scene at the end. :-)
This was a really great read -- thank you.