I loved this! I especially liked how, that the love between them became more and more evident as the story went along. It was there in the very first one, but that had a frantic quality to it that eased into pure love by the end when Jim was too wiped out by sex.
I also loved how each character had his/her own voice (although poor Chekov got left out). I loved Scotty the best (my fav from TOS and still beloved), but only by the tiniest edge simply because he's such a character.
I did like Christine's reference to Roger. Although she as a character is problematic in that she has no updated visual reference, so she can be a tad jolting when blending, but you handled her beautifully.
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Date: 2009-07-23 04:15 pm (UTC)I also loved how each character had his/her own voice (although poor Chekov got left out). I loved Scotty the best (my fav from TOS and still beloved), but only by the tiniest edge simply because he's such a character.
I did like Christine's reference to Roger. Although she as a character is problematic in that she has no updated visual reference, so she can be a tad jolting when blending, but you handled her beautifully.
Very well done!